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Post by lonemanslayer on Aug 30, 2007 18:15:08 GMT -6
Well I have always like Haikus. Either reading them or righting them (seems that they are the only kind of poem that I can do well). Some times they don’t seem to make any sense or they are just throne together but I try to have some continuity when ever I think one up For those who don’t know Haikus are Japanese Poems that are usually free flowing and then have only three lines. They fallow a set patter or template witch is that, the first line must have only 5 syllables (no more and no less), the middle line must contain 7 syllables, and the final line must contain 5 syllables. Just to give an example Righting for pleasure Trying to teach the viewers Horrible spelling They are a little tricky to start off with and sometimes you can’t convey the exact words that u might want to but I find it fun to try to "fix" and make my thoughts fit the pattern . I hope to post some haikus I have done sometime soon and I hope all of you will share any that you might have made ^^ and of course a dancing bunny--------->
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Dec 29, 2007 23:17:30 GMT -6
Post by Kagome on Dec 29, 2007 23:17:30 GMT -6
heres one:
On wings of Silver A chance to escape it all take it, dont look back
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Jan 8, 2008 0:40:04 GMT -6
Post by FangedSmile on Jan 8, 2008 0:40:04 GMT -6
Ooo, i love that!
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Jan 8, 2008 19:55:53 GMT -6
Post by Kagome on Jan 8, 2008 19:55:53 GMT -6
=^^=
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lonemanslayer
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Jan 24, 2008 20:03:56 GMT -6
Post by lonemanslayer on Jan 24, 2008 20:03:56 GMT -6
ok here are a few of mine
A flash of the blade Ending the life of a foe Wishing to find peace
Staring at the sky Wishing to find ones true place Finding a new path
Protecting ones love Giving your all to save them Finding your true strength
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Jan 29, 2008 19:57:29 GMT -6
Post by FangedSmile on Jan 29, 2008 19:57:29 GMT -6
Oooo, those are all so awesome.
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Jan 29, 2008 20:41:08 GMT -6
Post by lonemanslayer on Jan 29, 2008 20:41:08 GMT -6
thanks I really honest and truly just came up with thouse on the spot! lets see if I can do at agin...
Chousing the right words Convaying the right feelings righting my haiku
hehe that was kinda a funny one...
Gripping the blade tight Shifting to my fighting stance hoping to find peace
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Feb 4, 2008 21:36:21 GMT -6
Post by Kagome on Feb 4, 2008 21:36:21 GMT -6
heres some in light of this tragedy....
Blood spilt, leads to tears a family's trust misplaced a young life taken
Evil was commited His sin wont be forgotten He WILL face his sin
An Angel she must be After the end of it all She is now at Peace
Too soon did she go Left behind we mourn as one Anger, Sorrow, light
I truly believe we shall soon see her again one day at the end
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Feb 4, 2008 22:57:37 GMT -6
Post by FangedSmile on Feb 4, 2008 22:57:37 GMT -6
Those were beautiful, Crystal. I'm sure she appreciates those wonderful words. Maybe make a tribute to her? Yeah, like her photo and those amazing haikus- a tribute!
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Feb 5, 2008 23:54:52 GMT -6
Post by Kagome on Feb 5, 2008 23:54:52 GMT -6
maybe its an out for me....writing poetry...i did it in texas as well...i think i might post these on the RIP Sim group on facebook as well
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Feb 6, 2008 5:34:39 GMT -6
Post by FangedSmile on Feb 6, 2008 5:34:39 GMT -6
Good idea. I'm sure people will like them and they express what you feel so clearly.
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